The crystal water was so clear you could see the bottom of the deep blue sea. As I gazed from my small wooden boat I could see the amazing coral reef and all the exciting living organisms. I was astonished when I saw how beautiful and marvellous it was. The depth and the colour was amazing, the most wonderful thing I’ve ever seen. I wish my parents could see this. I never thought the sea could be such a beautiful place. Everything seemed calm and peaceful. This was by far the best day of my life. I could enjoy my time on my own. Then BANG!
Ethan I like your work because you used some of the word on the display the story is intresting it mackes you want to read more of it i like the bit when you said i could enjoy my time on my own.Then BANG!I liked that bit and everyone who read it will like it
ReplyDeleteYou have painted a great picture with your choice of words Ethan. Well done. I do hope you'll join 100WC next week!
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