A good letter Gurdeep, you have organised your ideas into paragraphs well. You have thought carefully about how Epimetheus might be feeling and expressed this in your writing well. I like how you have used a simile and compared Pandora's hair to a lion's mane! You have presented your work in an effective way.
This letter is outstanding Gurdeep you have used a range of vocabulary and a simile. There are many adjectives they describe the letter well and make it sound more interesting. The background picture engages the reader and it looks really phenomenal. Well done I can see you’ve worked really hard on this letter. by calum
What a fantastic comment Calum. This will really help Gurdeep, and others, with their work! Can you think of anything Gurdeep could do to improve his work?
i like your diary its very nice.
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I like your Literacy work because the background of Pandora holding the box and it looks affective,I think it's amazing:)
ReplyDeleteI like your work and your background and if I saw that i a book I would read it
ReplyDeleteI like your work and the background of Pandora opening the box looks really good.from hannah
ReplyDeleteA good letter Gurdeep, you have organised your ideas into paragraphs well. You have thought carefully about how Epimetheus might be feeling and expressed this in your writing well. I like how you have used a simile and compared Pandora's hair to a lion's mane! You have presented your work in an effective way.
ReplyDeleteThis letter is outstanding Gurdeep you have used a range of vocabulary and a simile. There are many adjectives they describe the letter well and make it sound more interesting. The background picture engages the reader and it looks really phenomenal. Well done I can see you’ve worked really hard on this letter.
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What a fantastic comment Calum. This will really help Gurdeep, and others, with their work! Can you think of anything Gurdeep could do to improve his work?
ReplyDeletei like gurdeep that your work should be publisih in the news or in the paper.
ReplyDeleteGurdeep i have seen your work it is fab!!!!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteI have seen your work.Well done.