In Literacy we learnt about Pandora's box. Mr Broadfield asked us to pretend to be Zeus and write a diary extract about the day. Here is my work. What do you think? By Ellen
An excellent piece of work Ellen! I really like how you describe Pandora using similes.
Mallica - Well done for being the first person to comment on a piece of work. I'm glad you found Ellen's work interesting. Why did you find it interesting?
i like your diary its very intresting.
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I like the work you've done it really interesting,I like the old paper and the greek border.I LOVE IT!!
ReplyDeleteAn excellent piece of work Ellen! I really like how you describe Pandora using similes.
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Mr B
Ellen your work is amazing.I like your background because you have an old old piece of paper and the greek background looks really interresting.
ReplyDeleteELLEN ! i am Just amazed by your work it's so beutiful i love the greek paterns and the old backround
ReplyDeleteAn excellent pice of work Ellen i like how you describe Pandora with ajectivs short words comes similes good work.
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