Monday 19 September 2011

More Amul and the drum.

Here is Rehmel's story based on Amul and the drum.

One day there was a young boy named Amul. He lived in a hot, small village in India. Amul had always wanted a drum. His mom worked hard for the rich and all she got in return was a small amount of grain. Amul’s mom was loving so she sold her grain. Amul loved his mother so much that he didn’t care if he had holes in his socks.
One morning his mom found out that the price of grain had gone up. She was overwhelmed. She ran very fast like a cheetah to sell her grain. Finally she made it in to the market where she sold her grain happily. She realised enough money to buy Amul a drum. On the way to buy a drum Amul’s mom saw someone less fortunate than herself so she gave the money to the poor family. In return she got some fine   wooden drum sticks.
 Amul was overjoyed. He tapped anything he could find. Later on that day Amul heard a women calling for wood. Amul did not like giving his stuff away but he kindly gave the old women his drum sticks. In return Amul got some wedding bread. Amul did not show how sad he felt.
Later on Amul saw a couple arguing because they had no food. Amul gave them his fine wedding bread that the old women had given him. When Amul gave them the bread they were so happy that they gave Amul a fine wedding coat in return.
A while later saw a freezing man who had been robbed. Amul saw the condition he was in so he thoughtfully gave him his fine coat. In return he got a beautiful horse. Amul was happy so he went home.
Suddenly Amul saw a man who looked upset. He needed a horse to get to his wedding. Amul felt sorry for the man so he gave him a ride on his horse. When they got to the wedding the man asked what Amul would like in return. Without hesitating Amul asked for a drum. Amul went home happily playing his drum.    

3 comments:

  1. nice work Rehmel I wish my work had the same quality as yours

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  2. well done i could sit and keep reading it all over again supper work .I like how you used one day later it is a piece that should go to to are hand teacher .

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  3. you have go a talent in you smart boy i like it a lot it is outstanding work

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